Well my first Chapter. not much but I'm proud of it.
Some clarifications:
I'm German and this is my very first fanfic which means that i expect a lot of mistakes. If you find any don't hesitate write me.
This here is a Prequel to a Prequel to a Prequel to a story. How is that possible, if this is my first fic? easy i have some friends in RL (very bad at English and since the German sub sucks they aren't bronies ) and i have a very vivid Imagination so from time to time I tell them a Story (they like still like my Pony-stories but i don't think they think of them as Ponies *shrugs*) which i create on the spot. In this stories everything can be inconsistent and out of character, which i try to catch and Eliminate now that i write them down.
Another thing is there are some references to Stories which only me and my friends know so far, sorry
e.g. The dialog between the two Ponies in the Top is a reference to the original Story( remember this is a Prequel to ...), but I think by not telling who those two are it adds a little bit of Mystery.
another example is that Celestia and Luna have been Princesses for around 10 Years at this Chapter. there is a huge Story how that happened which i rather liked.

Now you are probably wondering "why this Story?" and my answer is "Because it is the shortest." That's it. I can test the ropes and find out if its fun. If i like writing you will get the other pony-stories in the future too.

Another thing i want to mention are the names, because i know there will be questions about that:
Sour and Sweet Viez are the twins, now why don't they have the last name Cider like their parents? Because it doesn't work like that in the Ponyverse. For example Big Macintosh is not Big Macintosh Apple (and Rarity is not Rarity Belle *gruml*) so the children can have different last names then their Parents (or no one at all). But wait now your are wondering why Lord and Lady Cider have the same last name, that is explained simply. When ponies Marry they can change their names, in fact Lord Ciders maiden name(is that right for males?) is Sunshine.